Your lucky that it's big haha 4. 9 years ago. It's like a prison for books and random junk, and you never see it again until you decide to move your room around, which for me is usually every 3 years or so. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. I think my bedroom is amazing but still has a bit of work to be done on it for it to be a masterpiece! Well done Emma I could really picture your bedroom well use of spelling and I like the words you have used. My Bedroom I would give you a 3. Colors are a big part in my bedroom because the colors describe who I am and what my personality is like because I am a person who prefers darker colors. The darker colors in my room are mainly my wardrobe doors and my duvet, my duvet is black, grey and a dark orange. The theme begins with a deep sea green feature wall on the right hand wall. Just make sure all grammar and spelling is correct. The best metaphors come from the heart. Its an old 50 inch Panasonic TV with a gray color scheme and a black outline and controls on the front. At the bottom of the bed I have a bright red cover I keep it there just in case there's a cold night so if there is I can pull it over my bed for more warmth. Really good, just a few punctuation mistakes. You could be mistaken for being in a movie theater. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. He is a untidy Australian Barraband and he is loud with a weird sense of humor some how. Right in front of you as you walk in is my blue patterned desk with my small, white basketball hoop hanging above. I thought you could have added more adjectives to describe the objects you talked about (such as the Lego and drums) but I loved how you used words such as wade instead of walk, avalanche instead of fall and navigate instead of look/travel. I have a ps3 sitting in my room waiting for me to get my t.v put in which will be a samsung t.v. In the distance you can see the woolshed, it is made out of corrugated iron, like the chook shed it is pretty messy on the inside though. Next, the dampness, if you accidentally leave something on the ground its automatically soaked, well at least when you leave a cup out you have something to drink in the morning. My dervay has crumbs in it and hasn't been washed in a week. Well I think it's there to get a good view of our old house, right next door! If were tired, then R.I.P floor, your burial is in progress. WILL HS BEDROOM I can imagine the messiness of your room and you used good punctuation and I like the Explanations. Thank you so much for cleaning it this weekend Colt!!! At first, I thought you were describing the ocean! There is the skull of the first Tahr I have shot which gives you a clear indication that I like hunting. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. The untidiness of my bed is also horrific, just a pile of blankets, sheets and a duvet all scrunched up in the middle of the bed. As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. I love my bed to bits (literally my cats rip it to pieces) My room is upstairs so as soon as you walk up the stairs you are in my room. The floor in my room is medium sized. The layout in my room is a very practical layout and is a well organised way to have it. This is the exact opposite of the earlier metaphor saying that your home is a workplace. As you take a small tentative step through my bedroom door, the first thing you shall see is my old, wooden, glory box, that looks as though it has seen many times, both good and bad. Yeah I know I left it messy on monday but I promise you I cleaned it up as soon as I got home [wink wink]. I want to be out playing with my friends.. I have shiny white wardrobes that are very large. The mirror is directly in line with my bed so it was scary when I had just watched a horror movie about the urban legend Bloody Mary and had to go to sleep. September 2014. In total I have 9 hats that make my room stand out and the brands on many are monster energy, Billabong e.t.c. Until you see that my little carpet paradise is surrounded by pile of mess. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. I love the colour scheme in my bedroom as turquoise blue is one of favourite colours. I understand why mum doesn't like me being in my room too much. I would probably just proofread your work before submitting it. My walls are white with dark wooden paneling. 3+. When I walk into my room all I can smell is dirty sweaty clothes. Near where this wall joins the feature wall there is another painting. My bedroom is a deep freeze. On your left will be a built in cupboard for my clothes and other things. In my room I have lots of draws and places to put stuff but hardly use any of because most stuff is on the floor. There are green curtains in my room that catch your eyes. My bedroom My curtains are also blue. Light, open, spacious and its mine. On the left behind the wall, you can see a lot of lego and a few book and also a bean bag. My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. List of Metaphors for Home. The primary metaphor is the most basic of metaphors. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. I liked it how you said you wouldn't change your room and it is a good space to relax. Beside the desk, in pride of place, is my single bed. Lastly the furniture, I have three desks I don't know why, but I do. The next thing your eyes are drawn to is the cluttered, varnished oak shelf in the back left corner of my room. The space of my room is quite small, but if you take out my draws it's a massive space. Out my east facing window you can see the black and white calves frolicking through the lush green grass in the paddock and the different coloured cars zooming down Thompsons Track. I spend probably 12 hours a day on my bed so it needs to be nice and comfy luckily it is. I think its very organised also it makes it feel spacious. I have to balance on my chair and Sams shelf to reach my dictionary! Just below bed there are the studying tables for homework and other work. Very good vocabulary Sophie.I could imagine i was there. Use adjectives. Along one wall has the three dressers. It was a great story. How my bedroom looks? In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! I can imagine what your room would be like. There are photos of my family and a painting that I did myself. People who love the outdoors might feel most at ease and happy when theyre outside in the forest. Every room has accessories, even if it isnt a bedroom. This crossword clue Metaphor for Good work. My light shade is a bright red with white flowers scattered over it. My floor isnt actually that colorful but because there are heaps of clothes everywhere you cant tell how boring colour is. MY BEDROOM cock is life. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. Furniture is one of the biggest features of the room. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. The color of the carpet is a dark grey which goes with the furniture and the color of the walls. My duvet has white and pink checkers on it, ontop of that I have a small blue blanket with symmetrical squares on it. On the right hand wall you will see a dark sea green feature wall, the others a subtle black white. Reuben has provided a spot on description of his room. I hear it as push all your cloths under your bed and chuck them in your wardrobe. Jessie T Usher Related To Raymond Usher, But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! I would like to get a bit of colour into my room because at the moment it is pretty plain. There is also a big built in wardrobe which has heaps of space in it ( where I chuck all my stuff in). These creatures are also patterned on my bedsheets and pillowcases, companionable to me in the small hours. It is uses lots of descriptive language but after a comma you have put a capital like never made, One big and you have my bedroom has One build in wardrobe do you mean one built in wardrobe other than that I liked it, You've used punctuation correctly I don't really see any errors but full stops in the right place, capital letters well done. I would like my room to be neater and tidyer so my mother would not be nagging at me all the time saying pick up your clothes Bree or make your bed Bree. I think you edited the grammar well with making it make sense but there were a few spelling mistakes and no capitals for I So when you walk into my room on your right will be my bed facing you with a bedside table for my books, clock and a light for reading. No faults with your spelling. I like the constant use of adjectives, it helps me visualise the colours. I have two soft pillows filled with feathers and two cotton filled ones. My tv is sitting in the corner of the room but is easy to see because of the size, it is 39 inches and cool looking. My bed. R5. the final theme is football simply because we love football and there is football stuff everywhere that we play with in the house. Above my dresser is a medium, wooden framed mirror that sits above my dresser at head level.I often use this mirror to do my hair in the morning or put earrings in. I also have surfing posters around the room of surfers that I admire and aspire to be like someday. My tiny wardrobe has been painted the same colour as my wall apart from the handles and legs which i think looks pretty cool, and my desk is covered with random bits of paper and a couple of monitors. My walls are light blue and my ceiling is white. David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, The house is an old homestead and the wood has a great chestnut kind of color. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. The furniture in my room is rather basic. Well done. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. My king single bed is jammed in the right hand corner with my beside table just beside it and underneath my window. This description is on how my room looks now with the layout, accessories, furniture and colours. My wardrobe is unbelievably messy because theres so much stuff I have to fit in it, because my room is small compared to all the other rooms. If I could change anything about my bedroom I would start with a new duvet because of the bright mixed colours. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. As you enter my bedroom the first thing you see is the large divider that sits in the middle of my room separating my sister and I. Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. Finally, the coldness, if its snowing that cup of water is frozen almost solid, I had to use three blankets those mourning, it gets really chilly. But quite a fun place to fool around. In my bedroom standing in the doorway looking at it. Writers usually describe the setting at the very start of a story. The next best thing about my bedroom is the accessories that make the room mine. Also another way to brighten the room would be to open the curtains. Personally would like a orange feature wall in my bedroom but when you're renting a house you have to have permission to do so. My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. The relaxation of leaping onto it at the end of the day is basically the same as reading a extremely tired baby a lullaby. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. For next time you could work on not repeating ideas in each paragraph. So to end it off I love my room it is fun to do trick shots in and playing with lego just in my closet I have a little bit of room so I want to place a chair in there with a lamp and have as my little private area so I can play on my ipod read books and also use it to hid from people when we are playing hide and seek with little kids. I think Annie has given an accurate and fair description of her room. 5. When did organ music become associated with baseball? This seems to be a fair reflection of your bedroom. And I don't have to worry about other siblings entering my space. My most special object in my room is my tiger picture above my bed. Other than that good job. Being next to it gives me a warm feeling. I am lucky as the sunlight peeks over the fence and smothers my walls with a bright, warm glow. The bedroom is a place of solitude, a place to just relax, I spend most of my time either sleeping or reading and the rest of the time is for cleaning, it's not the fanciest but it's mine. Pretty good if only you could see how i see your bedroom. [4] Smell origins may take the form of a noun (the smell of leather) or an adjective (a leathery smell). You described your room well George. Let me tell you about my favourite place to be AKA my bed. Im honestly surprised that its still hanging on to the wall and not falling, judging by all the weight its carrying. Overall, well done Teatukura! I have some great accessories in my room that can give you a story about my personality. There isn't really a theme to it. There's pictures everywhere, bright jewelry, and so many perfumes on my duchess. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. So I have my bed on the left wall and on the other side of my bedroom is my tv cabinet. Personally Im happy with my bedroom, the only problem is that it isnt done. So overall your writing is amazing. Still have questions? MY BEDROOM I think Emma used lots of punctuation and i liked haw she told us exactly were her room was. Your writing is very descriptive. Im a bit compulsive, whereas is Sam is often tired or moody, so the room not only has the consistency of Two-Face in cleanliness, but will also resemble him; one half dark, messy and overall ugly, one half clean, clear and less ugly. Or, it might be used to express how dirty the home is. Quite a few good words but a lot of bland words in your writing making it a bit boring. My bed layout is in the corner of the room with a bit of space in the middle of the room. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. Your punctuation is really good, but you are missing a few commas and had some capital letters missing. My bedroom is down the hall and to to the right, past the small bathroom. The jewelry box once belonged my wonderful Mother. I like the layout, colors, furniture and the style it has a red feature wall (my favorite color). 2 long pillows sit on top of my bed behind a small, dark square pillow. In my room I have a cactus and a succulent plant on my bedside table. Although those are all of my creative accessories now. The wardrobe is the oldest piece of furniture in my room it was there when the house was built which was a long time ago. Style , layout , accessories and furniture are the 4 best qualities about my bedroom because that's what makes it mine. But I don't even know why the window is there in the first place! Your punctuation was good. My room is VERY messy. No need to be fancy, just an overview. A medium size room down the end of a long hallway. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, Then, you were talking about how the home had turned into a place of work. I like how I am able to visualize your bedroom. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. I like how much description is in your writing, mabey next time dont keep repeating your self, Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. You could imagine if you lived in a house with a lot of children that you might feel like you were in a playground at times. Now, the layout. On the other side (the right hand side) there are 2 dressers a long short one with lots of stuff on it (my one) and a thin tall one with models on it (Jacksons one). Then there's the senses - smell, sight, sound, touch. I think Hannah's story had lots of descriptive words and had good punctuation and spelling. Does my room have a theme? But you did miss out a few commas. The clothes are untidy because they cant fit into each draw. I have a light pink duvet and a red, white and grey stripy duvet. In the corner by my door is my double bed, in the other is my desk and stool. I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. It might not be your typical 13 year old bedroom because it's a spare room. Here are some topics Im going to talk about, firstly the layout of my room, secondly the lighting then the accessories and lastly the furniture. The spelling was very good I struggled to find any mistakes. The cleanness room isnt the best for a girl like me, Kilt thrown on the ground along with my socks and shoes. On the floor there is all my stuff for my I-Pod and I-Phone like my charger and headphones which are plain white and usually tangled up. Compare your house to somewhere else where you also feel those feelings that you can feel every time you step in your front door whether its relaxation, comfort, escape, or even boredom! Its so messy that you think if you close one eye and squint, you might have thought you were at the dump yard. My bed is very comfortable, fluffy and soft. The wall opposite the door has three picture that me and my sisters had painted quite a while ago. Big books and small books. Brothers Of A Feather Driving Wheel Lyrics. DVD, TV) and add comas in some places. In my room I have fairy lights these are to brighten the room up at night. My bedrooms accessories brighten up my room a little bit. The sight can be sometimes messy, with my clothes everywhere. But at one point you said in your accessories paragraph "But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog." Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. Overall I like my room more than hate it, for it has my favorite things and it is where I spend the most time, because I sleep there. My accessories, make my room the way it is. The layout of my room is great and I really like it. 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